A Winter Pyre - 2012

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By Lilliana Delanor

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Written February 9, 2012



Winter chilling to the bone

Wind screaming like a banshee

I'm lying here alone

Imagining you beside me


With your hands stroking my skin,

my sanity is not safe.

everywhere your mouth has been,

I feel your stubble chafe


I want to feel the burn

as you build the fire higher

I'll burn you in return

Care to join me on the pyre?


Like the phoenix, we'll rise again

emerging from the ash

We'll feel the flames lick our skin

as our tortured bodies thrash


Love and lust intertwined

our burning bodies fused

Paradise having been defined

We lay sated and bemused


For all this I yearn

This truth I will not hide

Come to me and burn

While winter rages outside


© Lilliana Louis Delanor 2012



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moonfroth Level 3 Commenter 3 months ago

The sincerity of the passion is strong, but I'm not sure the fairly regular rhymes & slant rhymes & the irregular line feet are the best vehicle for the FEELING.

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Lilliana Delanor Hub Author 3 months ago

*smile* Thank you

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Dim Flaxenwick Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

Brilliant.

Voting up and awesome. The passion came through as beauty. Passionate love IS beautiful.

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